With the coming of Christmas holiday, I have a two week holiday. 求檢查語法錯(cuò)誤

【專家解說】：I have a two-week holiday.而且HOLIDAY與前文重復(fù)。或者可以寫成vacation.如果你不是專業(yè)英語，要求很高的話，holiday與vacation可以通用 decided--decide還沒到來所以現(xiàn)在時(shí) stay at home and memorize words---我感覺應(yīng)該改成I decide to stay at home to memorize words. all the day-------all day I will go to church----I will go to the church名詞前面要有冠詞。 celebrate the Christmas day---- Christmas 這個(gè)節(jié)日不能有DAY。 圣誕快樂Merry Christmas 而不是Merry Christmas Day with people in church 重復(fù) 多此一舉 It will have a lot of fun太平淡?？梢赞D(zhuǎn)換句式為I think it will be fantastic 我感覺全文可以改成: With the coming of Christmas, I have a two-week holiday. I really expect to it. I decide to stay at home to memorize words. But I won't stay at home all day. Because I will go to the church and celebrate the Christmas with the people. I think it will be fantastic. 望采納。